- My Spidy Senses Are Tingling -
One day in New York, Spiderman and Vulture were back at it again; but this time, Spiderman seemed to be having a few problems. After tossing Spiderman into a watertank, Vulture thought that his interruption would no longer be a bother to him. He continued to set his master plan into action. All the while, Spiderman was looking for a way out of his trap. When he tried shooting out his web, nothing happened.. when he tried to climb the walls, the walls were too slimy.. Spiderman seemed to be a little confused on what to do next. Finally, something sparked in Spidermans' head! He knew just the thing to do. Spiderman, at full force jumped to the roof of the tower, bursting through ready to take on his unprepared rival for their second battle. Spiderman was not going to let Vulture mess with the innocent people of his city.

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ReplyDeleteI liked the title, I don't know why I didn't think of something more creative. I forgot to mention the fact that The Vulture had a plan, I think I need to pay more attention to detail and make sure I touch all bases when writing. Everything about this piece was great. I love your writing all in all.
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